Eikona
07-27-2009, 07:28 AM
I just went through Su Zhou and spoke with every NPC I could find, and looked at every dialogue option that I saw and could access. Here is the start of my compilation of text errors. Due to the large number of NPCs, I will create this one thread for Su Zhou, and add replies, one reply per NPC.
Suggested corrections are marked in red in the screenshots, and written in bold underlines. I've left style alone, and only noted grammatical and spelling errors.
Note: I have noticed (just now) that the references to the 'kung fu' world across all the NPCs is not consistently capitalized. Some call it the kung fu world, others call it the Kung Fu world.
NPC: Cissy Lau
Coordinate: 130, 229
Suggested Text Changes:
From now on, you can only love me, dote on me, you must not cheat on me, everything you promise should be done.
Lucky Bingo Introduction:
"Lucky Bingo", surprise everyone
everyday! Have you played "Lucky
Bingo"? Have you
accepted the award?
"Lucky Bingo" event:
Everyone has a chance to play every
day, you can choose 3 cards once.
Time interval between the two draws
should be more than one hour
of on-line time. In the condition
that you have opened the card window
and have not
selected the cards, if the window is
closed because of network, shutdown
or movements, you have a chance to
play it again. In the condition that
you have opened the card window
and selected the cards, if the window is closed because of
network, shutdown or movement, you
have no chance to play again. But
you can accept your award. Every
player who plays "Lucky Bingo" has
chance to get the award.
How to play:
1. when the selected cards are
revealed, you will get the award
corresponding to the cards. You have 3
chances to select the card.
2. There are 3 kinds of awards. They
are: chance to draw the "Lucky
Bingo" super award, secret item
award, experience award.
3. When you get the chance to draw the "Lucky Bingo" super award, you will
get a chance to select a card in the
Super award. Try your luck, once you
hit the jackpot, you will become the
most enviable person in the world.
Note: Don't forget to accept your
award from Cissy Lau after.
Note: You can play only when your
level reaches Lv 20 or above!
Suggested corrections are marked in red in the screenshots, and written in bold underlines. I've left style alone, and only noted grammatical and spelling errors.
Note: I have noticed (just now) that the references to the 'kung fu' world across all the NPCs is not consistently capitalized. Some call it the kung fu world, others call it the Kung Fu world.
NPC: Cissy Lau
Coordinate: 130, 229
Suggested Text Changes:
From now on, you can only love me, dote on me, you must not cheat on me, everything you promise should be done.
Lucky Bingo Introduction:
"Lucky Bingo", surprise everyone
everyday! Have you played "Lucky
Bingo"? Have you
accepted the award?
"Lucky Bingo" event:
Everyone has a chance to play every
day, you can choose 3 cards once.
Time interval between the two draws
should be more than one hour
of on-line time. In the condition
that you have opened the card window
and have not
selected the cards, if the window is
closed because of network, shutdown
or movements, you have a chance to
play it again. In the condition that
you have opened the card window
and selected the cards, if the window is closed because of
network, shutdown or movement, you
have no chance to play again. But
you can accept your award. Every
player who plays "Lucky Bingo" has
chance to get the award.
How to play:
1. when the selected cards are
revealed, you will get the award
corresponding to the cards. You have 3
chances to select the card.
2. There are 3 kinds of awards. They
are: chance to draw the "Lucky
Bingo" super award, secret item
award, experience award.
3. When you get the chance to draw the "Lucky Bingo" super award, you will
get a chance to select a card in the
Super award. Try your luck, once you
hit the jackpot, you will become the
most enviable person in the world.
Note: Don't forget to accept your
award from Cissy Lau after.
Note: You can play only when your
level reaches Lv 20 or above!